Cindirella Aitana.Torresano.Alvarez

Once upon a time a princess,his mame is Cindirella.She is very pretty,his hair is readhead ,your eyes are brown and it's a little small.                                                             His mother died of the H90 virus.His dad Hot married with a bat girl.The stepmother forces Cindirella to did the videos of his sisters of YouTube, Instagram...                         One day Cindirella went to look Who has the cure for the virus of his dad .Cindirella  it started to Talk with the profesional person that had the cure of the virus of his dad.The profesional person made a vals , Cindirella is very exaity bat his stepmother Talk Cindirella that SHE'S had to made 20 videos of fashions stilings.Cindirella is super sad bat his Fairy  godmother has to made all.Cindirella is in the vals they had a dress whit his formules. In a while it was12:00. She went to his House the person had a pice of the dress .                                      The person  made a vídeo call and she recognized It was her .They save his  dad .     And colorín colorado this story is over.           Aitana. T

2 comentarios:

  1. Wow... I have no words... it is a really different story but also it is very familiar to all of us. Some members of our families can be infected of this new virus we all heard about, so it is kind of realistic.
    You used the past tense correctly but remember! his=boy, her=girl jaja.
    Well done Aitana!
    -Teacher Marina

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  2. Hi Aitana! What a creative story and interesting story.
    Remember to reread for spelling - there's a few errors I know that you know how to spell :).
    Great job!

    Don't forget to check out our art project at https://primaryenglisheuropa.blogspot.com/2020/03/shape-collage-part-1.html :)

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