Sofía Senchuk
To kiss a princess
Once upon a time, there was a princess than lived whith her fairy goodmother. She had a dream to live in a castle whith her parents.
In one night when the fairy goodmother was slept the princess escape to the enchanted woods. When she was runing in the forest, she found a big dragon. The dragon take the princess to his cave, offer food and water. She ate, she drank and she went to slept. The dragon read to the princess a story.
The next morning when princess woke up the dragon gave to the princess a horse. She rode and went to the castle.
When she was on the way to the castle, she found a knight flewing in a dragon.
When the princess and knight arrived to the castle there did a banquet. Then when the people came start to sang. The princess woke very beatiful. The knight gave to the princess many flowers and a kiss.
THE END
Nice job Sofía! It is a nice story and I like how the dragon helped the princess, it is something new in fairy tales!
ResponderEliminarAnd the grammar is fine and also the use of the past tense, well done!
-Teacher Marina
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ResponderEliminarHello Sofia I like your story. I like when the dragon read a story to the princess. Have a good day I am Victoria
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