THE PRINCES AND THE PARTY
María Díaz Higuera 4ºA
I´m María and I´m a very brave princess. Last year with my friend Lucia we became knight. We fought with a giant and a dragon, but since we didn´t do very well. We asked the fairy godmother for help. And what she did to help us was turn the giant into a dwarf and the dragon into a butterfly.
The butterfly flew of to the enchanted woods.
We rode on our horses and there a wizard gave us a poison and we fell asleep.
My father the King commanded his knights who they gave of us a kiss and we woke up.
As everything went well we did a party, we sing, we dance and we ate a lot of candy
The End
María you need to know that I love stories about brave princesses! Old tales used to tell us that princesses were cought in towers and needed a prince to save them, but it does not happen in your story. Your story is better and amazing!
ResponderEliminarYou used the past tense too and that's wonderful!
Nice job María!
-Teacher Marina
Hi Maria. I love that you're part of the story.
ResponderEliminarGreat job with the past tense except you forgot just two: we sing, we dance = we sang and we danced.
Great job!