THE PRINCESS AND THE KNIGHT Victoria Shveda
THE PRINCESS AND THE KNIGHT
Once Upon a time their was a princess. That princess have a crown a blonde hair and a violet dress but she have a power necklace. She live in a castle and her dad is the king. In that castle is live too a very beautiful knight. HE IS IN LOVE THE PRINCESS!!! One day the princess woke up and the necklace was not their and the princess Lesly said-What can i do i need my power of the necklace. She was crying 😢 them the knight enters to the princess room and said - what the matter? She said him with is the matter - I lost my necklace. Them they call the king, went the king enters they explain. He was scared, because he imagine that it can be the evil stepmother and he said - old the knight need to found the necklace. The knight Alex it his name said - ok, we go to found. They can´t found the necklace, them they was need to return, because they have scared to enter in the enchanted wood. To the next morning the princess was missing them the king almost die but not. Old the kingdom it was found her, but the knight enters in the enchanted wood and there was a very big castle in color black. The knight enters to the castle and the princess it was trapped. She was near the poison, and the necklace it wiht a evil stepmother and a wizard. Them the knight took the necklaces and made magic with the wizard. THE KNIGHT IT WAS THE WINNER!!! Then the knight rescues the princess and the princess give a kiss to the knight and they have ate happli and live partridges. THE END
Wow Victoria! There are so many twists and turns to this story - it's very exciting! To say "todo/s" we say "all" not "old" (which means "viejo"). Great job!
ResponderEliminarGreat story Victoria, as usual!
ResponderEliminarI was afraid the knight could not rescue the princess but he did, awesome news!
You used past and present tense when it was needed, good job but I agree with Ellie's comment about your story.
However, great job!
-Teacher Marina
Great story Victoria, as usual!
ResponderEliminarI was afraid the knight could not rescue the princess but he did, awesome news!
You used past and present tense when it was needed, good job but I agree with Ellie's comment about your story.
However, great job!
-Teacher Marina
Thank you Ellie and Marina. I miss you Ellie and Marina
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