Jimena Rodríguez 4ºA
The Princess and the swan.
She
was once a princess named Lilu who was in her castle.
One
day he went out to the square next to the castle.
In
the square there was a fountain with fish, bunnies and deer.
It
was an enchanted forest with paths ... It was beautiful!
Lilu
went every day and every time it was more beautiful.
One
day, Lilu went down a path, and found a pond in which there was a
white swan and was amazed at its beauty.
Lilu
went out every day to walk through the forest. When I reached the
pond I saw the beautiful swan swimming in the water. One day the swan
spoke to Princess Lilu, she was a magic swan and she could speak, the
swan told Princess Lilu that she was a very beautiful girl, and that
a wizard had turned her into a swan many years ago, my name is Dilan
, the swan told him and Lilu ran to the castle because it was too
late and she did not want to tell her father, King Leo.
The
next day I go back to see the swan, but it was no longer in the pond,
suddenly, a young prince came out on a path, and said to Lilu, Don't
be scared, my name is Dilan, the old wizard cast the spell and has
set me free! Lilu befriended young Dilan and they went out together
through the enchanted forest and they were happy for many years.

It is a nice story, I really like it. However, I think you have used the translator a lot, or at least, you copied the story from a different place because there are so many words we didn't see in class. But I like the story as I said.
ResponderEliminarWell done!
-Teacher Marina
Nice job Jimena! Make sure you pay attention to gender and using "I", instead of he or she :).
ResponderEliminarCheck out https://primaryenglisheuropa.blogspot.com/search/label/4th%20Primary for some fun activities with me :).