The Princess an the swan - Jimena Rodríguez 4º A

Jimena Rodríguez 4ºA

The Princess and the swan.






She was once a princess named Lilu who was in her castle.
One day he went out to the square next to the castle.
In the square there was a fountain with fish, bunnies and deer.
It was an enchanted forest with paths ... It was beautiful!
Lilu went every day and every time it was more beautiful.
One day, Lilu went down a path, and found a pond in which there was a white swan and was amazed at its beauty.
Lilu went out every day to walk through the forest. When I reached the pond I saw the beautiful swan swimming in the water. One day the swan spoke to Princess Lilu, she was a magic swan and she could speak, the swan told Princess Lilu that she was a very beautiful girl, and that a wizard had turned her into a swan many years ago, my name is Dilan , the swan told him and Lilu ran to the castle because it was too late and she did not want to tell her father, King Leo.

The next day I go back to see the swan, but it was no longer in the pond, suddenly, a young prince came out on a path, and said to Lilu, Don't be scared, my name is Dilan, the old wizard cast the spell and has set me free! Lilu befriended young Dilan and they went out together through the enchanted forest and they were happy for many years.

2 comentarios:

  1. It is a nice story, I really like it. However, I think you have used the translator a lot, or at least, you copied the story from a different place because there are so many words we didn't see in class. But I like the story as I said.
    Well done!
    -Teacher Marina

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  2. Nice job Jimena! Make sure you pay attention to gender and using "I", instead of he or she :).
    Check out https://primaryenglisheuropa.blogspot.com/search/label/4th%20Primary for some fun activities with me :).

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