THE WIZARD HARRY POTER
ALVARO ESCOLAR 4ºB
ALVARO ESCOLAR 4ºB
The character in this story his skin color was white, with black hair, with glasses.
he wore a black tunic and striped scarf.
He was a kind and friendly boy who liked to help others.
He was a wizard studying magic book
Once upon a time a wizard named Harry Potter, one day the wizard became a monster, made a magic potion that turned into a frog. I didn't tell anyone, I didn't mean it.
One day his friend the knight discovered the secret of the wizard.
Harry went looking for him and turned him into a frog, locked him in a cage and wrote 71326789.
When the others found the cage they did not know what those numbers were.
Harry did know, saying those numbers to human being.
Wizard harry was bad because the king had kicked him.
One day the king broke his bar, and Harry was good again.
He went to find his friend the wizard to make him human.
And colorin colorado my story is over
Nice story Álvaro! You used a very known character and described it to us to imagine we know him, it is great! And you changed the original story into a new one, that's better! Great job!
ResponderEliminar-Teacher Marina
Alvaro - I love this version! It is funny and I like that you added new details.
ResponderEliminarPay attention to the subject - you say "I didn't tell anyone, I didn't mean it." but I think you mean Harry.
Great job.
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