AITANA FERNÁNDEZ
My history
My history
Once upon a time a baby princess that lived in a castle with her dads. The best friend of the baby princess was a dwarf. The baby princess had a blond hear and blue eyes and the dwarf had brown hear and brown eyes. Once day the princess and the dwarf swam in a river of the enchanted woods and suddenly a evil stepmother caught the princess and the dwarf but the princess gave the evil stepmother a poison and the evil stepmother drank the poison and she died and all the people was happy because the princess and the dwarf were saved.
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Uff, thank goodness the princess and the dwarf could scape from the evil stepmother! It is a really nice end!
ResponderEliminarYou used the past tense correctly and also used connectors, well done!
-Teacher Marina
Hi Aitana! Great job, I like this creative story! Remember "pelo" is "hair" not "hear". Check out https://primaryenglisheuropa.blogspot.com/search/label/4th%20Primary for some fun activities with me :).
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