SOFIAN.
ONCE UPON A TIME,ONE GIRL WAS LIVING UN A CAMP,SHE HEARD A NOISE THE EVIL STEP MOTHER!THEN SHE RAN QUIQLYINTO HER HOUSE BUT SHE FAINTED.IN AFEW HOURS, SHE FAUND OUT THAT SHE WAS LAYING ON THE BED AND THE DOCTOR WAS THERE WATCHING HER.
WHEN SHE SLOWLY OPENINNG HER EYES,OHHH!😰😰 THE DOCTOR IS THE FHATER OF MY STEP MOTHER...SHE RUN FAST AND SHE RAPIDLY OPENED THE DOOR SUDDENLY HER FAIRY GODMOTHER THER ESTOPED HER WHIT THE MAGIC BAR AND SHOT THE EVIL STPMOTHER .THE LIVE OF THE GIRL RETURNED A NORMAL SHE DIDEN'T TO KNOW MORE ABOUT HER STEPMOTHER.
THE END.
Nice job Sofian!
ResponderEliminarI think you should have read your list of verbs while you were writing your story but it is fine!
-Teacher Marina