Rubén Muñoz Sanz 4ºA THE CHILD WHO MADE HIS DREAM COME TRUE He was once boy who wanted to the play soccer an he found a very old boy the other boy gave him training in just a while they had already done a lot of thigs in just. 10 minutes he went home very happy. until he told his parents fell asleept and the next day he went back to training and singing how happy he was his parents congratulated. Him for finding a coach they were going to go home but the boy did not want to leave so he kept protesting and in the end found the key to dream about football. The end
Hi Ruben! How nice that the boy made his football dream come true! Make sure you pay attention to the way you use periods (.). They should always have a capital letter afterwards :).
ResponderEliminarGood job!
Nice story! Everyone deserves a happy ending like that!
ResponderEliminarHowever I agree with Ellie, you should write more commas and dots to separate the sentences; but it is really good.
Good job!
-Teacher Marina