The egoist King
Once upon a time
there was a girl that love all around her , but the rest of the people was not like that ,they were sad and furius .
One day the girl asked her mother – why is everyone sad?—and
the mother said – because the King takes the money of the people --.
At the next day the girl went to the castle and said to the King
– please return the money – but King said – no theese are mi rules and now the
money is mine !!! – seeing that the King would not return the money she made a
plan : take a sleep posion frome the
wizard , a rope from the dwarf and the fairy godmother to make she and the rope invisible ; at night she
sleeped all the knigts, climb the rope and took the money to give it to
the people .
The people were happy and named her the princess .
END
Violeta García
The topic of your story is really interesting! And it is kind of orientated to reality. Nice job.
ResponderEliminarThe writting part is great, you used the past tense and also used connectors, perfect!
Great job Violeta!
-Teacher Marina
Aww thank you .
EliminarI love writing stories!