Once upon a
time there was a beautiful princess.
The king that it´s was the dad of the princess, it was
very, very bad. He want that the man that want to get marry with her dother it
has got to be: A knight, tall, no much young but no much old,very strong, no
much fat but no much thin, it´s have to be perfect, ...
The princess
always said, that she don´t want that her dad decide the man she wants. And the
princess said to her dad: Dad if you are goin to decide the man I want, I don´t
want to marry! And always, when her dad so her one man, she does her best
to let him go. She don´t want to marry never!
Long after,
she became queen, but she don´t have any husband and any king, and she was
happy.
END Natalia Tijerín Hernández
I find your story very interesting. I really like the fact that the princess doesn't want to get married! Cool!
ResponderEliminarBesides that, you wrote it right, made a great use of the past simple verbs and it follows time sequence, so great job Natalia!
-Teacher Marina.