THE ENCHANTED WOOD AND AN UNEPECTED RESCUE.
One day in the King castle ,everyone are scared his little princes i was not the same.
she behaved totally different from the other fairytopia princes .She don,t used her dress, she don,t combed her hair and much more.
At night the princes bored with everything she ran away.
She ran away to the enchanted Wood where her BFF fox fimis he promised her that she had a good eye .the princes is not was worried about that since she has a good eye.But maybe not enough.
In the enchanted wood the princes and the fox are very happy they play with the fish there are in the lake ,with the squirrels whit the enchanted trees...
When night falls they lie on the grass to sleep with all the animals.
but one night the most evil stepmother in fairytopia she caught the princes and she take her to her little haunted house.
in the morning the fox he realized that the princess was not.Quickly running towards the castle to warn the king.
When he say it at the king ,the king quickli call all the fairytopias knights to helps the princess ¡camon more quickli! go to help my little princes.
After a long road ¡ho! my little princes.
camon knights untie her .
My little princess ho sorry dad sorry no you don,t have to ask for forgiveness hi dad you remember me ha hrrrrr yes I remember you lime what¿ you are my shister? Yes and then wy have you caght me.because dad stop paying attention to myself when i discovered that i didn't want to be a princes and i took you with because i don't want you to do the same to me, dad is that true ,yes and i don't regret,ho my shister is not a monster you are the monster,me ,yes you .Ok if i am the monster,bye stay both here together in the enchanted wood that i am leaving .Bye bye the two sisters say laughing.
sister let's go to live some funny ones at time.
END
And so the two sisters achieved their
dream of going from being princesses to
being totally free together
LUNA.ROMERO.MARTIN
Wow, it is a really nice story! And also a little strange, but I like that! Different is great!
ResponderEliminarYou change the verb tense from past tense to present tense, but you did it right and only when you had to.
I only recommend you to separate sentences or parragraph from the dialogue sentences, to understand better when a character is speaking and when it is the narrator writing.
-Teacher Marina.