THE QUEEN OF THE CASTLE
Laura was a girl that since she was little, she wants to be the queen of the castle.
She glows up with that idea. She was a little unhuppy because her family was always poor, and she thinks that he never can get it. One day she find a beautiful guy, she was tall, with blue eyes.
She inmediatly was in love with him. And he thinks too that she was a beautiful girl.
During the days he was more in love with she, and he with she. Two months after he will married with her. She say yes so happy. They had the best wedding on the earth. They were very cheerful.
Nice but brief story!
ResponderEliminarYou used ten sentences as I said, but I bet you can do it longer! However, I liked your story and you wrote it right! So great job Angy!
-Teacher Marina